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Thank you for taking the time to listen to my music. I really appreciate the review.
You are welcome Justin!
Hey Justin, I've got a new song you may be interested in......a good track and I have a scratch vocal. here lyrics and a link to the track....https://www.broadjam.com/s
e-bed-7123-5. it has not been mastered Big Old Rock
(I'm Good For One More) (Mississippi Nights)(Gentle Goodbye)
We were just kids, on a summer hike
Took a rest, by a big old rock
We carved these words, I love you forever,
We never thought, at the time, It would have, such meaning
That our love would ,grow to be, As strong as that, big old rock
And every year ,we both return, To that rock, to read those words
And carve a little deeper, I love you forever
I love you forever ,like it's carved in that big old rock
Those words are as good today, As they were back then
And that big old rock reminds us, Of the undying love between us
When the time comes, we can't return, Others will wonder, who it was
When they find, that big old rock, They'll feel the love, carved in stone
For ages to come, that big old rock, Will be found again, and again
And those words, I'll love you forever, Forever carved in stone
The weather and the years pass by, But that rock remains steady
That big old rock ,holds a special place, that big old rock, etched in our hearts
I love you forever, hmmmmm, Carved in stone
Strangers will find those words
And wonder who it was......
Justin! Passion! Loved it!
Thank you for the feed back! ðŸ'
Justin, Here is the track..Like I said this lyric idea can work, if edited for this track....of course it will be remixed etc after vocal.....If it turns out to be a real winner, we can always "send out" for a better mix etc.... Marvin
Hi Justin, I have a song started... Called " Raised On A Tractor"... Beings I'm not a decent singer, I'd like you to give it a listen. ...The lyrics I have for it is from another track that didn't vibe but this one does..A very decent backing track....Pop Country. and has you all over it.... Of course the lyrics should be edited for this track but the idea is there. I can send you the track... let me know, but for now you can hear the said track on my page.... and of course it will be re mixed after vocal
Raised On A Tractor.
I'd Give It All Up track
When we get these Blue Northerns,
It's Ice, it's snow, It gets way below, low
But we take em, gotta love em
We wouldn't be here if God didn't want us here
Chorus I was raised on a tractor, proud of it,
You can bet, I ain't no actor, and I'm proud of that
I'm at home on a tractor, and that's, a real big factor
Of what you see, and what I am
I was born on this farm, the dirt is in my blood
When I die , well, plant me in the mud
When My daddy died he, left all this to me
Just like his daddy did, it's in our blood, you see?
I don't need no fancy haircut, I don't take no magic pills
This is better than a mansion, high upon some hill......
My family's farmed this land, with grit and determination
Going way back , to the birth our nation
Got a lot of grandpas, all buried upon that hill
One day I'll join em, when and if, it's God's will..
You can have your latest and greatest, eco friendly, plug in car
Work in a box, sleep in a box, a box could be your home
Go anywhere you wanna, they won't even know ya
So you can keep your fancy life, .......
This ain't just a farm, it's our way of life
A little taste of heaven, my family, my wife
I love it like our Grandpa's did, with every seed I sow
And for future kin, to look back and know
Chorus 2 X
Hey sorry I haven't got back to you. I've been busy. I like the lyrics. Can I hear the track?
The song " We Got Catching Up To Do" is finished. it is among the 1st 5 songs on my page
I thought you might like to hear the final mix.. Marvin
Hey Justin, trying to connect. I have a Pop Country song you may be interested in.... BTW congratulations on the success you're having with your song "Passion" Thanks Marvin
Thanks for the review of "I'm A Happy Man". funny you mentioned the mix.. I just put up a better mix #2 on my profile page.. Thanks Marvin
Sweet. I'll check it out.
Thanks for your kind review of Street Music Suite. To be honest I didn't know I'd left this open for review, it's very old and was my first attempt at composing music for a film (someone's college project). Although it's not actually a loop, it uses keyboard accompaniments and midi voices that haven't stood the test of time! I'm off to remove it from the review roster ...........................!!
Thanks again and apologies for wasting your time,
No worries. Keep at it. I heard a lot of potential in the song. Really not bad especially for your first shot at composing for a film. I'm sure you've written some killer material since then.keep at it man.